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Lala on Sai by charmiinq Lala on Sai by charmiinq
I can see a lot of problems in this, but I'm proud!!
Have Lala on SAI!
Hope ya like!!
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:iconxilemito12:
I stay well design, originality and all but the picture remained slightly twisted so to speak and originality give 5 stars but you did excellent and the colors blend well and some not, the shading does not have and fill color this target but stay well forgiveness drawing by little information but this really cute drawing and colors if you keep on improving'd be a practically and serious better than others without presuming artist, not criticize'm a mess criticizing but I liked the originality, color and but excellent drawing technique.


postscript: perfect ;) I give it a 09 mass great
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Overall I think this was pretty good quality though I have some things I could point out about this drawing.

First of all, I think that that the colors are very well picked, in the sense of that they're all in a simular pallete/shade. (purple/lavender) The way you shaded it was pretty good but could still use work. I think you got the overall shapes pretty good but there are still things I'd like to point out. I tthe think that the face looks a bit.. disproportioned because usually if a head is that big then there is most likely there would be bigger facial features. I also think the wings look a bit odd but would be arecompletely fine with no canges. But lastly what most bothers me is the coloring not staying within the lines. But thats a REALLY easy fix, because you can just use an eraser to erase the color straying from the lines. And last but not the very least, the linework. I think that the lines look jagged and messy at times; for example, the chin area (righter side of it) lookes like it could've been fixed with some sinple erasing.


Thanks for reading!!
Cinder <3


P.S.
sorry if this sounded harsh.. it's just that I really wanted to help you improve

P.P.S
plz don't hate me
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Galaxy-Fari Featured By Owner Edited Oct 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh wow!
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2016
Thank you!
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Galaxy-Fari Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np!
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67fats Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
small hair
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
very small hair
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Xilemito12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
Why thank you!!
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Xilemito12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oki
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Ascerious Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Awesome!
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It's a pun
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
Thank you!! :D
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Ascerious Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome!
Did you get it? Eyebrow Wiggle - steven universe 
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
Yey!!

Sadly no XD
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Ascerious Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016  Student Digital Artist
;la; = :la:
lala
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
Oooooh! XD
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Aquarithyst Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
I love the way you colored her!~
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charmiinq Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2016
Thank you so much!!~
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